I have already published eleven chapters on the FanFiction site, under a pen name and the reviews are excellent. Chapter 11 is my favorite chapter. Mia is already at the base for Officer Training School and meets some interesting people. Let's just say - things start to get hot.
I feel the book may start a little slow, but that is intentional because Mia is a bit innocent, but she grows up fast.
If anyone is interested in finding it on FanFiction, LMK!